The Pit and the Passion

She held her gaze steady, mainly so she could delve deep, deep into those chocolate eyes. Together with his sharp, angular nose and intense, almost predatory, expression, he reminded her of a peregrine falcon on the hunt.

The Pit & the Passion

Friday, December 16, 2011

Ad Line for Triptych--critique please

I’d love comments on the Log Line (aka Ad Line) to my latest book Triptych. You can find it at Lynn Crain’s new blog, the aptly named Log Line Blog today.  Feel free to comment, edit or whatever.  



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